"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
I was super impressed with your narrative Anthony. You used some great adjectives to keep me interested - I especially enjoyed the phrase a "trio of friends", and words like "creepy" and "abandoned" which certainly set a scary scene in the grave yard. (I don't think I would like friends like that who would scare me out of my wits !) I am intrigued to know how the friends were able to have a hord of dead people come from no-where ... A great slide presentation too Anthony.
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
I was super impressed with your narrative Anthony. You used some great adjectives to keep me interested - I especially enjoyed the phrase a "trio of friends", and words like "creepy" and "abandoned" which certainly set a scary scene in the grave yard. (I don't think I would like friends like that who would scare me out of my wits !) I am intrigued to know how the friends were able to have a hord of dead people come from no-where ... A great slide presentation too Anthony.
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