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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 3 September 2019

why should we plant trees

WALT explanations have special parts

If we don't have trees we will die.I will explain why we need trees.

Trees take carbon dioxide away from the oxygen.so that we can to breathe so that we can survive with air.

Trees give us wood to build houses for shelter.

Trees give us food to eat so you don't  starve it gives animals food to.

My reflection is doing my brainstorm and the words. My wish is i did better.

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Friday, 5 July 2019

Use Descriptive Writing

WALT use descriptive  words and language to make our writing more intriguing.

We did this piece of writing to  practise using descriptive words and language.


The shiny zebra is is sleepy as a sloth.

The fat and shiny elephant is eating as noisily as a traffic jam.

The lime green grass Hi-5ed me as I was walking through the Mysterious jungle.

The zany zebra zoomed and is as stripy as a tiger.



Tow things I think I did were putting it on my blog and put it in the picture on it. I wish I did put my spelling better.



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Monday, 13 May 2019

My Family Publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My family I have 4 people in my family, and mum my dad oh and my uncle and my nana and me Anthony My mum is called Melanie. My mum is lovely because she gives me yummy food at home. My Mum is busy because she has to work with some silly people there. My mum is 34 years old, her birthday is on May the 1st. My dad is called Leo. My dad is a gamer. He plays Fortnite, It's where you shoot people in the game. My dad goes to the gym and body builds his muscles .He can lift 190kg at the gym. My dad is forty years old ,his birthday is on December the 23rd. My uncle is called Wayne. He is a builder. He has to work all day.My uncle is lucky because he gets a lot of money He has $ 1070 NZ dollars in his Bank. My uncle’s birthday is the 19th of July. My nana is called Debbie. My nana has a lot of money she has $761 in her bank. My nans is a busy worker. My nan is sweet because she gives me nice food. My nana is 56 years old and her birthday is July 24th. I love my family. Reflection: I did really well with my key words and information. My wish is that next time I will put my family in order.