"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
I was super impressed with your writing ... well done for including a simile and adjectives (using these makes your writing even more interesting). You have also used contractions throughout (correctly) and I love how you have used exclamation marks for added emphasis. Overall a brilliant piece of work ... I really enjoyed reading it - I'm proud of you Anthony !
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
I was super impressed with your writing ... well done for including a simile and adjectives (using these makes your writing even more interesting). You have also used contractions throughout (correctly) and I love how you have used exclamation marks for added emphasis. Overall a brilliant piece of work ... I really enjoyed reading it - I'm proud of you Anthony !
ReplyDeleteThank you my mum helped me a little bit but I did most of it by myself
ReplyDeleteAwesome work, Anthony! It's lovely to see that you are putting 110% into your writing.
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