WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.
My family
I have 4 people in my family, and mum my dad oh and my uncle and my nana and me Anthony
My mum is called Melanie. My mum is lovely because she gives me yummy food at home.
My Mum is busy because she has to work with some silly people there. My mum is 34 years old, her birthday is on May the 1st.
My dad is called Leo. My dad is a gamer. He plays Fortnite, It's where you shoot people in the game. My dad goes to the gym and body builds his muscles .He can lift 190kg at the gym. My dad is forty years old ,his birthday is on December the 23rd.
My uncle is called Wayne.
He is a builder. He has to work all day.My uncle is lucky because he gets a lot of money
He has $ 1070 NZ dollars in his Bank. My uncle’s birthday is the 19th of July.
My nana is called Debbie. My nana has a lot of money she has $761 in her bank. My nans is a busy worker. My nan is sweet because she gives me nice food. My nana is 56 years old and her birthday is July 24th.
I love my family.
Reflection:
I did really well with my key words and information.
My wish is that next time I will put my family in order.
