"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Hi Anthony ! I was very impressed with your descriptive sentence using adjectives, nouns, and verbs. (In your table you had the word "dark" under the heading of Verbs - this would be better placed in the Adjective box, but you could certainly put the word "creeps" within the verb table). Keep up the great mahi and please say hello to Mum for me ...
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
Hi Anthony ! I was very impressed with your descriptive sentence using adjectives, nouns, and verbs. (In your table you had the word "dark" under the heading of Verbs - this would be better placed in the Adjective box, but you could certainly put the word "creeps" within the verb table). Keep up the great mahi and please say hello to Mum for me ...
ReplyDeleteHi Anthony I like the picture you chose to describe I think that it would be scary if you were there. Nice job mate.
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Thanks, Whaea Tanya and Ilisa. Mum says Hi too.
ReplyDeleteYou have selected great adjectives and verbs to suit your picture! The use of the verb 'creeps' is very emotive! Tino pai to mahi
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