"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Hey Anthony, I read your character map and was very intrigued to find out more about your character, Hunter. You showed lots about his personality and I wonder if you could add a bit more detail in your writing to show this? I really like some of the words you have carefully chosen such as 'approached.' Ka pai to mahi!
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
Hey Anthony, I read your character map and was very intrigued to find out more about your character, Hunter. You showed lots about his personality and I wonder if you could add a bit more detail in your writing to show this? I really like some of the words you have carefully chosen such as 'approached.' Ka pai to mahi!
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